this is much different than you other poem (this isnt an insult, nor a compliment...just a mere observation...*sarcastic* arent i just wonderful at reviewing?) that was fun to read...a tune that my inner child must have created (i think...) was playing in my head while i was reading this and it really seemed to fit this...its hard to explain with typing...its like some foreign song with a drum beating really loudly and this really-oh...better explanation: it sounds like a song that they would play as background music on the show Survivor...but, anywho, this poem makes my head create songs (even though it may not sound like a compliment, it really is...)...this review is just making me sound stupid so i will stop now...
***Eresteizulim***

Different and (Dont take this the wrong way)Funny in a very weird sense of the word.

please dont let ur cricket take my shoe! only messin dat was a little on the weird side but it is a good poem! i liked it! x

Sorry I didn't review earlier! Surgery, I've been out of it and what not. Well, anyway, I have to say this was definitely a strange poem! But really, strange is a great thing to be. In an artsy sense. I applaud your uniqueness with this one. Good job, my friend- and now I outsmart the cricket ghost! :)

Lovely. I love it. :-D
-Nicole-

..i really dont want my shoe to disappear so yea im reviewing! . uh yea that was a bit weird but it was good!

I like this a lot...great job! Keep it up.
-Nicole-

demented chirping cricket? Okay! Anyways, I really enjoyed that poem and hope it gets a toon of reviews! Although, I realize I'm the first! Okay I liked the running part, it had my heart racing! Do the story! Do the story! Do the story!...(goes on for two days..) *clapses from lack of breath*