last night i watched a programme called 'not forgotten', about all the soldiers who lost their lives in WW1, and how their memories shouldn't be erased, and this reminded me of that. It reminded me of remembering your past, remembering those around you have gone. Not many Haikus can do that. Inspiring.

Wonderful, I love it. The twom images taken together with the thrid image of the ghost used in the headline fit together perfectly to express what it means to lose someone you love(d).

Wow. I like it. I can't handle structure...I like it. The concept is just really cool, to me. Nice poem.

I am not sure the formet of Haiku-s. But this is unique.

Wonderful, perfect in diction, form, message, emotions. Great piece, especially the two one-word-lines have an awesome effect.

ok, i dont want to leave a dorky review. bc dammit, my reviews SUCK. ANYWAYS! ill be like the 21 others who have review this poem: wow. (ok, corny moment over.) this is just...genius- how you did cut up the cut up haiku. ok maybe u wouldnt think so. but it definitely works here. and i got shivers all over me from reading this- tho i have been bad and havent been leaving u many reviews bc ive read a lot more of ur work and it think its excellent. but oh well...im really tired and here i am, with finals tomorrow, reading ur poetry. u better feel proud- RIGHT NOW!

Wow... you're really good!

Great poem. I love the format, and the simplicity of the words make it so much more meaningful. Great job!

The words entrance in their gentleness, with a hurricane of force in their fall. Form, rhyme and syntax merged into an image touching . . . listening to Mozart's requiem . . . I can't linger—nostalgia would overcome. m

amazing format.. I like it a lot... great poem..t ahnks for your review

If you were to teach, you would drive your students to despair by your implicit ability of creating such concise perfection.

that makes me really sad. i don't know if that was yr intention or not, but it really does. very good poem, though. it says a lot of things in very few words. ace.

Wow! That was really good! It is almost spine-tingling! That's a good because if it was completely spine-tingling, I would be scared... Beautiful!
~The Wilted Rose

Wow this is so different. Brilliant!

intricate, beautiful and meaningful!! well done!! *bows down in admiration*
never stop writing!
much lovex
o please take a look at sum of mt stuff, id really appreaciate ur opinion on my story: thats not how it happened.