Aie! Very good! I'm trying to write poetically because I want get a record but . . . It's not working . . .I really liked it. BTW, I am reposting "The Underdogs" under the name Ishiki no Mayonaka and I'm removing from under this name because, to put it bluntly, it sucks :) I have to review ARAT. I read it the day it came out, but I gotta write a formal review. Ja ne!

This had the gentle flow of a song and the insistence of a poem, flawlessly combined. The language was strange and yet skillyfully woven together. I really liked when you spread out a series of words with one word on each line, but at times it did make it a little harder to read, sorta broke up the flow of the poem. Free verse rocks, well written!
~ winter

Bah, once again I really liked this piece. Keep up the good work :).

Hiya Ishuzu! I just thought I would let you know via a review (to make you slightly happier than a mere email) that I have a new poem and I would love for you to read it. Because I don't know, but it might make you feel better. that is, if you like yourself. Hmm.
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Luv me

wow! deep...
the beat of the poem really got me going there. i especially like your use of words. and the lines where you use only one word to describe an emotion, that's really good.
keep it up!

i absolutely love the last line. it's fantastic! I like the rhythmn of your poem also, i notice it flows almost like rain-constant with a few surprises. I think you have a really good feel for the english language and you...well...you make pretty phrases. uhm...yes, didn't i phrase that well ^_^ In short, i like it...sad...but i like it. Good work.

I love you dearly, but next time you don't tell me that you've written something new I may go shoot myself. Or steal Tom so he only cleans my house!
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Bob: Yay another dude!
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Sh! As usual, what can I say. Only that when reading it, you brought to my mind the sound of the rain, and made me remember a song that I shall now try and download and send you, because it perfectly fits this. Well, I think it does.
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The writing is wonderful, and it makes me want to go to sleep. I love the format too. I think it is lovely. even though it's a tragedy.
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Bob: What will be a tragdey is your not stopping this review. It's not an email Kaz.
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Oh. Sorry. Shtumness now.