 Poptart Guava Kid 2009-04-27 . chapter 2D:
oh ma gaw...
i couldn't stop laughing at the end...
you won't continuing it? shame... |
 Doom08 2008-05-13 . chapter 2The story is a little weak in some places (like i should be talking). But overall, I like it. But, since it looks like it won't be updated, it probably doesn't matter. Reminds me of Twilight a little, but, hey, this would be better. |
 Tomorrow in Tokyo 2007-04-27 . chapter 1OMG HOT! i LOVE vampires! |
 Lidyah 2006-09-03 . chapter 2Oh! this is so very interesting. Slightly chessy with the first chapter. But I do like it :) |
 Kamijo - Lareine 2006-06-24 . chapter 1Great story! It's a shame that it looks as though it will not be updated any longer considering that the last date was 2004. I would have loved to read more of it. Thanks for sharing what you have though. |
 Servant of Asherah 2006-03-05 . chapter 2I AM FREAKING BEGGING YOU TO UPDATE! |
 Cam 2005-08-07 . chapter 1 I admit I have a weakness for vampire stories.
This one should be updated.*nods enthusiasticaly* |
 Tom 2005-08-05 . chapter 2 Wow! This story is fabulous! Please update it! |
 mevampiregirl 2005-08-01 . chapter 2 It's really good! |
 mevampiregirl 2005-08-01 . chapter 1 Wow So cool! |
 Walter Dash 2005-07-19 . chapter 2I humbly submit my request for an update |
 emilystarr1 2005-07-04 . chapter 2ohmy**inggodohmygodupdateplease!!
Yeah, I bet you found that really helpful. ;p
But I did want to let you know that I loved this and wanted more! And it's neat to see how much your writing has improved. (Not that it's _bad_ here, but you can't help but notice a marked improvement in plot development and character development between this and Fine Art or Flowers. :) imho.) |
 kuenhckihgzer 2005-06-02 . chapter 2Yay vampire story ! *does a happy dance* ha ha I love vampire stories! This is a really good one. I like Quinn and Will. You need to write more! |
 hesfb 2004-10-04 . chapter 2hehe cool story. i wanna read more! *pouts* so please update! :) |
 Briel 2004-09-14 . chapter 2 I really think you should update this. It's a classic... |