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| kezya 2004-09-09 ch 1, | Very good. I can really relate to the emotion you're describing. |
| greenbanana 2004-08-03 ch 1, | yay! good poem! it flowed well and had a great rhythm. An awesome topic. I like the part "your pedestal will become your demise." |
| Random Tokin' White Dude 2004-07-12 ch 1, | This was amzing, I really liked htis part "So cold, so callous, looking at you. With pure contempt for what you do" And I am in a badn actually, sadly the people in it would never want to add music to anything I write since most fo them are christian and are easilly offended, oh well. |
| BlakLace 2004-07-12 ch 1, | i love how ur soo good at ryhming ! you should publish ur work ! |
| FamousLastWords 2004-07-10 ch 1, | Wow! That was GREAT! I'm going to send the link to friend the next time she comes on MSN. She's really into that kind of stuff. Great job!! |
| Infinite Smiles 2004-07-09 ch 1, | You make your point well. I like the language that you use. Well done. |