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Reviews For: Corporate Pedestal

kezya
2004-09-09
ch 1,
Very good. I can really relate to the emotion you're describing.
greenbanana
2004-08-03
ch 1,
yay! good poem! it flowed well and had a great rhythm. An awesome topic. I like the part "your pedestal will become your demise."
Random Tokin' White Dude
2004-07-12
ch 1,
This was amzing, I really liked htis part
"So cold, so callous, looking at you.
With pure contempt for what you do"
And I am in a badn actually, sadly the people in it would never want to add music to anything I write since most fo them are christian and are easilly offended, oh well.
BlakLace
2004-07-12
ch 1,
i love how ur soo good at ryhming !
you should publish ur work !
FamousLastWords
2004-07-10
ch 1,
Wow! That was GREAT! I'm going to send the link to friend the next time she comes on MSN. She's really into that kind of stuff. Great job!!
Infinite Smiles
2004-07-09
ch 1,
You make your point well. I like the language that you use. Well done.
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