spooky...you'll be the next Steven King!again...kuddos on structure and grammer

interesting though quite short update soon.Do you mind if u review my story 'cursed for eternity?

Chilling story I wished you had written more on the subject.

cool. really cool.

Hey Shelly nice story! Man...i'm not usually a fan of cannibalism but that was a creepy twist. Almost like a movie, i suppose. Uhm...in your summay there's an error...
"became the first
voices that haunts the Death Valley."
It should be
"became the first voices TO haunt Death Valley."
Well despite the grammar errors this is really good. Albeit, creepy, but good. Nice work.