That was pretty twisted. That's all there is isn't it? Too bad.

Very well written. It leaves enough to the imagination to be interesting, yet it gets its point across very well.

It was disturbing but you wrote it really well. I like to read stories that are fiction yet relate to reality in ways that it shouldn't. I don't know if that made any sense but anyway, I like the way you wrote this.

Oh boy, that was horrifying. Heh. But it takes a lot of talent to write something that creepy with just a few words. :)

Wow, that was absolutely disturbing, haha. You have definitely acheived what you were going for, and the end ties it up perfectly. A very sad story 'bout a terrible subject, but you made it a good and chilling read.

Very, very disturbing but at the same time horribly witty and inventive. An excellent short piece that hit me for a whirl with the ending.