  Aeria 2005-04-22 . chapter 1 gods lisa hurry up with the rest already... jj luvs ya ~AeriaD~ |
| VIRASS 2005-03-17 . chapter 21 whats the matter with you god! why isnt there anymore. im adicted to your story now sexy. i must read more!! more i say more! and anybody see my cupcake i miss my cupcake. |
| Coolilyflower 2005-03-04 . chapter 21 I really like this story, please keep writing |
| Michael 2005-03-04 . chapter 3 Um... I'm MacialEarthammer but I'm to lazy to sign on. ANYWAY, how tall is 5'12"?
But seriously, I love this story. Keep writing! |
  R9-regrin9 2005-02-09 . chapter 1Excellent! It's so hard to find stories (at least for me with what little time I have) that are grammatically correct! Although, I did find one spot.A pleasure to read.Cheers! |
| shanasheart 2004-10-23 . chapter 11 interesting...mmhm...you have to continue. I think Kirin should be pissed thinking she did that ta get him in trouble. It would be interesting if he was...well, cant wait for next chappy.
~shana~ |
 Alan Ball 2004-10-16 . chapter 7Good pace and rythm, the narrative flows well and ,in my honest opinion, its one for the publishers to watch.
The settings and characters are described well, the dialogue excellent. I have thouroughly enjoyed reading this. (Will probably post again my chapter 10 :D) |
 shanasheart 2004-10-11 . chapter 10Okay. usually i dont submit reviews becuz im really busy lately but...wow. ur story is great so far. Lots of detail and 'suspense' (i hate that word..sounds cheesy) You have to continue or else...i dunno. Ill think of something. But its a good plot. Usually most guy pt of veiw stories are...well lame. But "Kirin" seems very down to earth. Keep up with it. Ill be checking in... |
 opaltiger, King of Felines 2004-10-08 . chapter 1I likes! ^^ Definately some good material here, and what seems to be a good solid plot shaping up. |
| Sicialianna 2004-07-10 . chapter 1 I think your story is very good. I like how Gwyn changes mood quickly, it really adds to her personality. I also think how you switch from Kirin to the Dragon Lords is very cool. It adds a lot of color to the story. I'm looking forward to reading more of this, please continue. I think you have a wonderful thing going here.
Wonderful job,
Sicilanna |
 sQuee.i 2004-07-10 . chapter 1hey... it's a real nice story... pretty suspenseful... i wish i could write like that...haha... continue pls... pretty pls...with strawberries and anything sweet to topped it off...haha |
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