|Reviews for Fictional Pain|
| Alucard Nosferatu 3/14/06 . chapter 1
macabre, just how i lik it...
| poetic abortion 9/30/04 . chapter 1
A fitting title. Nicely written. )
| Lellida 9/23/04 . chapter 1
Lovely albeit chilling imagery. I agree with the fictional pain. As a writer, you can take certain liberties and create pain in your words. Your use of language here is beautiful; the forest, beach, oasis...sigh...
| nesy 9/3/04 . chapter 1
Es cierto que el mundo que descries en el poema es macabro. Aún así está bien escrito y me gusta. El mundo real, por así decirlo, no está precisamente lejos de ser macabro
| reversedxrevolver 8/26/04 . chapter 1
This poem paints such a powerful macabre feeling.
The imagery used is strong, it deilvers a feeling all on it's own.
Inspiring in it's sick, dark way.
I'd love to pick out bits and pieces and say "well, I especially loved this line".
But they're all equally fantastic.
| In Elegant Graffiti 7/23/04 . chapter 1
I think somebody needs a hug. 0o" This disturbed me. And so you know, that is quite an impressive feat.