macabre, just how i lik it...

A fitting title. Nicely written. )

Lovely albeit chilling imagery. I agree with the fictional pain. As a writer, you can take certain liberties and create pain in your words. Your use of language here is beautiful; the forest, beach, oasis...sigh...

Es cierto que el mundo que descries en el poema es macabro. Aún así está bien escrito y me gusta. El mundo real, por así decirlo, no está precisamente lejos de ser macabro

Beautiful.
This poem paints such a powerful macabre feeling.
The imagery used is strong, it deilvers a feeling all on it's own.
Inspiring in it's sick, dark way.
I'd love to pick out bits and pieces and say "well, I especially loved this line".
But they're all equally fantastic.
Amazing.

I think somebody needs a hug. 0o" This disturbed me. And so you know, that is quite an impressive feat.
-hugs-