Wow, they may not be perfect but they are excellent for each other, Bobby and Amanda. I had tears in my eyes at the end of chapter 14. He finally let go of what he was holding, he finally got it off his chest. The idiot has anger problems, though, eh? Though I can see where he's coming from.

This was so good that I'm favouriting it! Wow!
Beck is such darling, isn't he? hehe.

Keep up the good work, and keep those updates rolling in!

your faithful reader and reviewer,
gulistanlik

oh i loved this story. it was so sweet lol. you're a really good writer and i liked how you alternated between the point of views each chapter.
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wow, awesome story! the plot is fantastic and your characters are really human-like. I loved reading all 15 chapters of it. Great job =) keep up the good work! (nice, nice, nice!)

What a wonderful story. I'm actully kindof surpised that people thought he would have to choose beteen Amanda and soccer. I thought he would tell her about it -or she would find the letter- and she would press him into accepting. (Bobby's so cute, definitly not perfect, but that make him all the more endearing. And yeah they're a lot of guys like him, but I still hope I find one like him)(Sorry I didn't review the 15 chapters of the story but... I usually don't review all the chapters unless I have to wait for them =^_^=)-so good-I'm gunna check out your other storys now. Good luck! And go Beck!

Wow! that speech Bobby gave left me breathless. i was so awed i had to send it to my friend. I will never look at fireflies the same way again. awesome story! i loved it. i actually read it all but im reviewing on this chapter cuz i think it's the best one. i cant wait to read some more of ur work!

I. love. this. So much.

You amaze me to no end. :)

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A little late for reviewing, but I just reread your story. It gets better everytime! I love a well written romance. It was awesome, keep writing!(good luck with your writers block)

This was the perfect story to find on a slow quiet night. I enjoyed the peaceful flow of the plot and the simplicity and yet, richness, of the characters. I can't wait to read more from your list of works.

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It was very sweet. It made me cry, Bobby's speech at the end of his seventh chapter. I like how this story didn't go on and on forever and I think it ended perfectly. I wish I had a guy like Bobby. He may not be perfect, but he's human. Some of the things he does to Amanda are so sweet. You're a very talented writer and I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work. ~Jessica

Great story! I really liked it, and I think you did a great job with it. I can't wait to read more of your stories!

What an endearing story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading every word. It was short, sweet and heart warming. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks.

Ah, this story was absolutetly incredible...Beyond enjoyable...ALl of it was extremely well written and you're insanely talented and deserve loads and loads of praise...
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Kudos =) it's impressive enough that you can finish stories, let alone make them so great...

Hehe...I love happy endings. This is the kind of story that you never want to end. Wonderful work. ;)

I think you ended that quite nicely. You're a very good writer.

Aw, it's so sad that it's over! I just started reading this story and now it's over...it's really sad. Good stories r hard to find. Thanks for putting in the effort to complete this story, I know how hard it can be.