I think its nice regardless of what others say: )

This is a very pretty one shot, but I did notice that you used some lines like "opium eyes" that Francesca Lia Block has in her books, and your discriptions are similar to hers. It may have been unintentional, since she is your favorite writer, so i'm just pointing it out to you for your sake.

don't normally like very fluffy stories, but there were beautiful descriptions in this! well done!

i loved it. you did a great job =). it gave me this warm tingly feeling inside which is good cause the story reached out to me ^^.

it says the author is francesca lia block. You didnt write this! submit your own work