oh wow, that was amazing, i loved it, fabulous and i hope you never stop writing!

I've already said what I think about this, on the Short Fics thread, but I don't mind saying it again, here.
This is so... so sad, so depressing, so full of feeling... It reminds me of some things I don't think back to very often, but beside that... your wording, the feeling, the thought, the story it tells... it's all so beautiful- I don't know why these has gotten only nine reviews, and why I didn't read much replies for it on the thread. It's gorgeous, and this is the best poem I've read of you so far.
... (I've sat here for around two hours and still I don't know what to add to this, so I'll just leave it here.)
I'll see you later,
-Rachel

Wow, that's beyond sad.

i liked this, and thanks for your review as well ;)

It's slightly worrying how such a subject could seem almost beautiful in that poem. But it did. It was a beautiful piece of poetry, and took amazing talent (and perhaps courage?) to convey what you were feeling. I hope to God that everything's better now, that you're not feeling so low, and that you never think like that again! An amazing piece of poetry, though.

I love this poem.

Carrie... this is such a brilliant poem... I hope you feel better soon - nobody deserves to feel bad.

This was so sad...please don't do anything like this...you've got a lot of people on your side.

Wow Carrie...this is...wow...one thing however the line 'I’m sorry for hurt I caused, I now it cuts so deep,' shouldnt that now be know?
now none of this yourself ya hear?
Dani

that's really good. very deep and emotional. good job

WoW...that is all i can say basically! this is so sad and it is really good! keep writing and please take a look at some of my work thanks!