oh... that is beautiful...

Wow, that was really good. You captured so much emotion in such a short piece...I love it! You know, this would be a good intro chapter to a story, or the blurb on the back of a paperback. *nods* I would definitely read the story if so. Anyways, like I said, I loved it. Keep up the great work!! :)

hey
that was really beautiful! i loved how you go back to the coffee. i thought it was really nicely written with great description! going on my fav story list, and i am reading more of your work! please review my short stories!
lani