One thing that I'll bring up: "Or rampant violence". This was a little chunky. Maybe... maybe take out a syllable somewhere, lol. See, now I know I'm being picky. When I was going through it in my head, I got stuck rhythm-wise at that line, so this is just a comment.

No biggie, as usual.

Good stuff.

Hi, long time no write lol, i like it, theres only 1 line i dnt like, i think it would be good to alter this
'or western winds they gust'
Im not sure it quite works, but it ur song so anyway keep writin
Haz

I loved this one. Actually I love all of your work...but this one was good too. Great job!

I kinda imagined this song as a song that Good Charllote or Simple Plan would sing. Really good though.

hm...i dunno how 2 review this one...its good n then its just strange lol i dunno...im tired rite now...
Skye