Wow, what truly wonderful poems/poem. You are a great, great writer with a great sense of words. Good job.

great job! I really liked it... and the two do go together well.
Just one bad thing though, (and I know I sound like a teacher) there were a couple of places where I saw grammar mistakes. The 'to' in the line "the heart to hardened 'gainst the soul" and in your A/N should be 'too'. Sorry, I just always notice those things!
Yeah, But all in all, your poem is really great!