|Reviews for Dualed Reflection|
| evm 7/14/04 . chapter 1
Well, of this, what I can say is that I like your concept. But the stanzas seem a bit akward, they flow okay, but as you build to the climax you build up so much feeling, and the the last line jars a bit. I know I am not really one to be talking about flow since my poem mess up the rythym all the time, but I don't believe in coddling authors with false praise. Reviews should be for helpful criticism, not lies. It's sad the way Fiction press has become so lacking in reviews and so abundant with short reviews that do not tell you anything you truly wanted to know.
I missed you in Italy (as well as the rest of the Mafia). Hah! I have now lost officially 23 pounds!