GOOD JOB.

heya, this is a great fic. i feel like crying at the moment. it's so bittersweet the whole james and bella thing. ahh well, cya later ~ luv Alenor.

*applause* That was REALLY good! I loved this story. Bella reminds me of myself *sighs* ah well :DxRachx

omigosh this story is so sad, can you write a sequel where they do get together puhlease! oh it wud be so good! i just really wanna see them get together great story tho bye!

That was intense. Really good, and sweet, true-to-life and u represent their emotions beautifully, but i wanna cry now... ^_^

i want to see that story u have planned up soon!!

I love your stories! That was not at all what I was expecting, but it was a good ending! I've read and loved all three of your stories on fictionpress, and I can't wait for more.

reviewing again..
uh..huh..
what an ENDING!LOL'Z
well..it's kind of harsh but i really like your ending. very realistic.. (i guess this story is a bit real huh! still crossing my fingers that your love story will turn out fine..) reminds me of something..LOL..
well i like the part where james told bella that she's one tough princess.. though it's a bit confusing why james would choose Liv instead of Bella if she's his beloved. you didn't have any reason..
oh..well..at least in the end there's a spark of hope for the readers. .
i'll be waiting for your next story..
keep it up..
merry christmas..and God bless..

Wow!Leave for three days & BAM! the story's finished.To the review.Well the last three chapters:Very very good!I loved them all.But the one with Bella crying was very sad ;.;.This chapter:Aw!Yay!I sorta wish there was an epilogue but YAY.That was cute.I'll just /imagine/ how they get together.Can't wait until your next story comes out!A very advanced Merry Christmas to you too^.^.
God Bless,
Chelsea aka Sophomore =^.^=

VERY...early...lolz...great story! can't say i liked the ending tho...lolz...the more chapters, the more reviews!
-Katherine

i love the ending. Why? because it is realistic. Many fiction stories have the happily ever after ending and we all know that life isn't like that. I think the position that bella has with james is awesome. James really cherishes Bella as a friend and you know what? James can always break up with Liv. but Bella will still be there. I can't explain it. Platonic bonds are one of the strongest. Maybe stronger than romantic bonds. There is a much more higher respect. Like bella would be more respected than liv. like i said, i can't explain it. I am my guy friends best friend. And i think it is one of the best positions ever. Well written. I always love your stories. They aren't totally fabricated fiction. Bella shouldn't give up on love tho.

OMG! wad an ending! i was expecting more! OMG! (okay, say i'm crazy) sheesh! u can't end it lidat! impossible! it's like... cfg (oh nvm)... yeah, it suddenly ends... it's... not proper! like u r rushing thru it... NOT FAIR! can we at least hav a nser ending... as in it does not mean it have to be happy, but at least a proper 1... tt's too... abrupt? OMG! IT CAN"T END THR! NO! IMPOSSIBLE! (u hav juz meet an insane girl... sry for ur bad luck...)

it broke my heart.. i want to cry..
uh huh...
update very soon please..
another four more chapters i guess..
keeping my fingers crossed..
God bless..

This story is good. The main characters are clearly defined from the supporting characters and the interaction between them is pretty good.

About Bella's surname, I was pretty confused. In your summary, it says that her surname is Jacobs, but when you introduced her parents, their last name is Banks. You have to explain this somewhere in your story so that there won't be any confusion.

About Veronica's nickname, I think you should leave her name as Veronica instead of V. It won't interrupt the flow of your story.

Also, try and vary your sentence structure. Makes it more interesting as well as it keeps the reader's attention when you vary the place where you put the dialogue.

Good job and looking forward to reading more.

im lovin this of i think james is a mean bean! mwahaha cant wait to read some more buhbaI!

hey... wouldn't that be like 4 way calling? since there were 4 ppl on the line? do they even have 4 way calling? or do they have it but just call it 3 way calling?(random thought)
okay gots to go do homework...
but props to bella for holding it in in front of james... i can imagine that would be difficult. now... who is this girl?!
update soon!