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Reviews For: A Red Basement
circumspice 2005-12-06 . chapter 1
powerful
R.W. Zeppler 2004-07-20 . chapter 1
This is abstract, yet concrete at the same time. Your actions speak of screaming in a basement, with no one to even look up at your venting of sadness and slight anger, yet it shows how sometimes uncaring people can be in society; how cold humans really can be to one another. In a way, it can even be interpretated that you are ingoring your own emotions and need to prioritize your emotions more to yourself rather than others. Something like that anyway! Awesome write and very thought provoking!
zenmeow 2004-07-18 . chapter 1
I am afraid of where you go when you think like this- yet your work pulls me in. I see the horrors that you paint through the words that you use- and I am rivited to my seat!! Very well done! Keep it comin'! :-)
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