   The JohhnyMcKilt Productions 2006-11-10 . chapter 1AW **! i LOVED that!XD and galing mo talaga, p're! |
 LiTTLe-SNoW-WoLF 2005-07-08 . chapter 1hahahahahahahahaha... hi nikki! i still can't get over this poem you made! hahahaha... benta... anyway, continue on making good ones! |
 Leila Nikolas 2004-07-18 . chapter 1 Hehehe that's funny, I loved the end. the bit about the sister being
older isn't really needed though and is distracting. but otherwise,
great tone and mood, well done. |
 Aceles 2004-07-12 . chapter 1^^ How unexpected! I love this!
Away!
Aceles |
 Nascha14 2004-07-12 . chapter 1LMAO! The whole time I was reading it all I could think was WTF? Very good, very good. Only a wee bit lame. There are plenty of other poems on this site that are way lamer. Well, I'm off to see if lamer is really a word. O_o |
 hyper-butterfly 2004-07-12 . chapter 1lame.. but funny..! |
| Ta- 2004-07-11 . chapter 1 Hehe! It's cute! |
 Goingpostal915 2004-07-11 . chapter 1I loved this story. It was so cool because you really got the suspense going by making the reader think that a kid killed a person. Just one question, is the main character a boy or girl? |
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