Wow. This was really great. I was worried that it would be like so many other sequels/sides are, but it's not. Can't tell which one I like more.
The last two lines are really great, perfect way to end it, I have no idea how you managed to make it sound so...bitterly honest.
Anyway...yeah...great poem, as usual.

Again, great. Love to say more, but I've just ran out of time.
DB

I think it goes great with the other poem. Their's some much feeling in both of them.