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| Mentathiel 2006-05-05 ch 1,  | abuseVery cute... I loved the ending. |
| karboom 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW! HEHE! That was amazing. So light and hearty and yet so immersful. Man, the ending was simply amazing. So much tension and suddenly such an end! God, I love this bard and hope to hear another story from him soon!! Keep it up!! Amazing piece! Please R&R my stories people! http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1951816 |
| Alexis LePlume 2005-09-17 ch 1, | abuseIt was hilarious!I loved it. Pure genius. I can't think of anything you need to improve on, really. |
| Kiwiberri 2005-07-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was delightful! It made me smile. |
| more secrets 2005-01-08 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness, this was terrific! I really like your characterizations; you manage to do a lot with only a few words. And I like your skewering of the Tolkien tales. Even if I did grow up reading them, this is well-done. Can't find anything to improve. |
| wishing/dreaming/waiting 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abusehaha!! i liked that -- cute and clever, good job! |
| Pico the Great 2004-10-26 ch 1, | abuseWoo! This was in the IYWS anthology, and I was greatly amused by it. Greatly fun twist at the end. YOur chars are quite.. . interesting, I shold say. Fun device with the switch-offs between verse and reality; hmm, how often you think reality's switched in myth, so Grendel could really be, I dunno, a tarantula or something? It boggles the mind. . . .O_O ANYWAY enough mind-boggling. This is good and fun and I like. Kudos! -PTG |
| Anonymouse 2004-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was highly entertaining. The strategy of alternating verses with their disproval was both simple and effective, essential for a short story. Full marks |
| Vash the stampede45 2004-07-11 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHA great little story. |
| Michelle Munoz 2004-07-11 ch 1, | abuseSao: Heh heh, that's funny. I guess bards tend to blow things out of proportion is what you're trying to say? Anni: I wanna dragonlet! I want one NOW! Sao: O.o NOW look what you did! *stuffing cotton balls in her ears* Anyway, I liked Mila, she was funny. Anni: *kicking and pounding her fists against the floor* I want a dragonlet, and I want it now, and if I don't get it, SOMEONE'S gonna be sorry! Sao: *rolls her eyes* ~Sao & Anni |