Absolutely stupendous! I look forward to reading more about how much trouble Charlie causes in Boston. (I'm theorizing that she and Luke end up in the Army together and fall madly in love with each other. But that might just be me.)

xoxo,
Erin

THIS IS SO GOOD! Please update soon!

AH! **gasps in admiration and amazement** This is SO good! I cannot wait to read more, so PLEASE update soon!

very very well written. may i ask you a question? there is a teen lit mag that i volunteer for and i was wondering if you would consider submitting. the mag is called Frank (at the moment) and it is on the mesa librarys website. w.mesalibrary.orgwonderful story, really captivating

Aww... I love it! please update! i want to hear more...

I like this so far-- I hope you are going to continue it.

Very good chapter. I really like the way you have set up the story. I also really like Charlie's personality, I see a lot of myself in her. I can't help but think of what might happen when they get to Boston and Charlie meets Luke. Will she end up liking him? Or is she going to go on and have someother adventures? Or will she do both, have her adventures while somehow bumping into Luke everyonce in awhile? Guess I'll have to wait and see. Anyway, once again good chapter. KeiraJo.

I love it! It's deep and intriguing with JUST the right amount of detail. A wonderful piece of work, I'm SO excited to see more!

Awsome story so far! I'm dying to read more, but, seeing as you haven't updated for 5 months, I'm guessing this is all I'll ever have the privilage of enjoying. So sad, *tear**tear*Just have to say, your tallent is incredible!

Really good! Update soon. PS. Chapter 6 of Revolutionary Dream is finally written!

Amazing story.. I just watched 'Cold Mountain' the other day, and I've been looking for Civil War stories. You have talent, and I'll keep checking back.
Excellent work.

Excellent opening! This is sure to be a promising work. I like how the characters are well-developed from the get-go.
Keep up the good work!
~Platinum Azure
P.S. Thank you for reviewing my piece! Sorry if it gave you chills, but that was the intent, I'm afraid. Feel free to check out my other works, if you wish.

You did a great job describing everything. I felt like I was part of the story. Great job!

Impress story love your details.

*blink* Wow...Found you here too:) While I am reviewing it on MNI so You'll see what I think then. Just a question. Are the chapters seperation new, or is this what you meant by joining the chapters together?