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| Anastasia Who 2004-09-29 ch 1, | abuseThis poem was great. Awesome symbolism once again. Very good poem. |
| marinawings 2004-07-24 ch 1, | abusei can almost picture this in my mind. excellant! reminds me sort of of pilgrim's progress or dragonraid (a christian rpg). |
| Caitir 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abusean excellent point. normally I dislike rhyme, but this is good. very nice. |
| Getuie 2004-07-12 ch 1, | abuseI find this poem interesting... it has such a touching message, but the rhyme caught my attention. Quite different, but it works. |