Creepy. I like how the girl's voice hisses and cracks. Makes her sound more scary.

Much evilness and much scariness! keep scaring me w/ more, well scary stuff!

Oh my gosh, this is really freaky!! Why did I read it this close to sleeping time? Wow, I really love the building suspense and the sort of mystery that shrouds the nightmare girl. Lol, you should write more of these!
-Hillary