Drama, it's always nice in a story like this. George, or Geo-gnome (like that nickname, is an interesting character. I like his laid-back, comical tone. I enjoy the interaction through thoughts as well as dialogue and action. Can't wait to see what's next.

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Nice chapter. I definitely enjoyed all of the views points, made it more interesting. I like Bastian's personality a lot. Keep going.

You're welcome, Briah, afterall, honesty is the best policy. ^^ This chapter was something I've been looking forward to and it didn't disappoint. I like your comical dialogue and colorful descriptive language. I've taken a liking to the relationship between Steph and 'high society'. Keep it up. Oh, and I am in the process of writing a second chapter to 'Wedding Thoughts'. I believe I have four mapped out all together so keep checking. Good job!

Though there isn't much meat to the story I'm interested to see where it's headed. Judging by the summary, which is why I chose to read it in the first place, it sounds rather intriguing. Hope to see an update soon.