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| Alleyna 2004-08-11 ch 1,  | abuseThe perfect way to explain my own vicious little circle. Thanks for sharing this with us. Alleyna |
| LaceySue05 2004-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI Like this Poem alot... it's very good... Contin the Good Work... R/R Mine Plz and Thanks ! |
| Countess De Lioncourt 2004-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey. I know, it's anonymous, technically, but I'm too tired to sign in:-D. So, let's see. Nice poem you got here. I really like it. I can relate to it really well. I'll talk to you later babes:-D. Ciao. *Countess De Lioncourt* |
| NeWriter 2004-07-11 ch 1, | abuseIt had a few descriptive lines and I think the ending was quite well put. I agree with you; pain and hope are almost joined because one comes after the other. I feel like that right now - *sighs* hopefully this poem isn't a way to express what you feel now since it's not the best feeling to posses. I liked a lot the rhyming you did, although I would've preferred more descriptions in this poem than that! |