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Reviews For: City of the Gods
bugger 2005-03-05 . chapter 9
hey, this is a really good story. when are you gonna update it again?
bleh 2005-02-10 . chapter 9
eep! you stopped updating!! come on...its been months!! i still wanna read the rest of it any way...
bleh 2005-02-10 . chapter 3
0.0...did i really see you threaten not to post new chapters? shame on you!
Kakiryu 2005-01-09 . chapter 9
It's pretty intresting, although some parts do get confusing sometimes...I like!

Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao.
Nikerym 'Ksherea 2004-11-23 . chapter 9
yay! update. sorry that you're sick, know how that feels. get well! get well!good chapters, i enjoyed them, i can't wait to see where the story progresses, so i hope you update again soon. and your other stories too. Digitalis, and that one that's on the livejournal? i can't remember i ever saw a title for it. but i hope you can update those soon too. as always, v. nice.
CreatingMyths 2004-09-02 . chapter 7
More plot! You're on a roll!
Nikerym 'Ksherea 2004-08-31 . chapter 7
aw poor xavier. sorta... actually it's more like poor searra, not poor xavier. ok, now my head officially hurts. and i've got to stop hypothesizing on what's going to happen next, i keep getting it wrong. and that buugs me. anyway, yeah, i read and liked and reviewed! yay! cus i sorta forgot last chapter. i'm so good like that. so where's my digitalis update anyway? *grins*
this works just as well though. i suppose i'll have to start working on another chapter of something though. dammit. ok, time for class. bye, eh.
qq 2004-08-22 . chapter 6
O.o I liked the chapter. I do hope you write another soon. ^_^ I want to see Xavier's response. :D
CreatingMyths 2004-08-22 . chapter 6
Oh...the plot thickens! *cackles insanely*
qq 2004-08-16 . chapter 5
This story is interesting. I like it. ^_^
Nikerym 'Ksherea 2004-08-15 . chapter 5
o trust is established... is this a good or bad thing? was the Shar telling the truth? does he really reign over peace? ... tune in next time, right? *grins*
enjoyed the double update, so i gave it double reviews... lovin' the story, can't wait to see more... now i'm off to check out the new story you wrote... see... this is what happens when i'm denied fictionpress for a day! i get all review happy! and no... don't take it away again... cus then i would cry... *sad puppy dog eyes*
Nikerym 'Ksherea 2004-08-15 . chapter 4
yay! action! *cackles*
unfortunately, i suck at ancient mythologies... the istar is in my penname because it's supposedly the elven word for wizard in Tolkein's world. so i am the wizard of shadow! :-D
but excellent chapter, i'm off to the next...
Nikerym 'Ksherea 2004-08-11 . chapter 3
dontcha just love being able to create a cliffhanger with just ONE word? *cackles*
that was a mad quick update if i do say so myself, eh? and yes, i do like Searra too... i foresee possibilities with him... *cackles* and yes, i do love to cackle... but i hope you can get the next update out quickly as well, eh? that'd be v. mad cool. *grins*
Nikerym 'Ksherea 2004-08-10 . chapter 2
o i'm reviewing. do you know how long it's been since i reviewed something? i'm SO lazy! feel honored!
anyway, i wanted to drop you a line to let you know how much i like your story. (the first part too)
i really like xavier, 'specially the fact that he's a patient person. it's getting really intriguing... i was all confused the first story when Amai was introduced, and then wham! she shows up in this one better than ever. right.
i can't wait to see more, so update soon, eh?
Darkladyknight 2004-07-28 . chapter 2
Hum...interesting start on this story. I like it and m hoping to read more soon.
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