Wow...you captured almost exactly what I feel about my own friend. Absolutely loved the lines " I can hear the taunting laugh at that very girl and I see how her wedding band gleams.." Oh, how I love this poem!
~SwimmerGirl
Swimming for love but lost at sea
A swimmer girl I'll always be

It's me! That poem is so sweet! I loves you! You are such a good writer!

This is really good I love the format you used, it looks really professional. The topic is good too.