He loved her and she let her jealousy and anger take over. Thats incredibly sad. Well written though, great job.

oh my god... how freaky and sad... he wasn't even cheating! that woman has problems... stuart was cool. lol

Hi there. I was going through stories when i stumbled on this one. I enjoyed it very much . i love the twist at the end! good job

Nicely done! I do feel some remorse for Stuart, though. -_-

Bwa-ha-ha!!
I love the twisted-ness of it all. Really, what more can be said other than 'You write well' ?
Excellent characterizations and descriptions. I really felt Caroline's frustrations and jealousy.
What a thoroughly unimaginative and sterile house they live in. A perfect reflection of their pathetic marriage.
Truly well done, Aspen. Keep it up.
(But just remember that "fluorescent" is spelled with a 'u'! )

That was a good story. The last part made me laugh. Great detail, helps paint a full picture for the reader.
You're an awesome writer, keep up the good work.

Ah, nothing like bitter irony to make my day. Nice touches with those slight details like the popcorn ceiling and how the bathroom is so sterile. I think it's constructed very well too.