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Reviews For: Strawberry Bonbons

Boadicia
2005-09-12
ch 1,
Oh, this is lovely. I love how each of your haikus could stand on its own, but they work so well together too. And the strawberry bonbons are a sweet yet angsty touch. I don't really understand how it fits together so beautifully, but it does!
katmonkey
2004-07-27
ch 1,
Wow, these are amazing. Awesome imagery and I like the title :D
*lime-girl*
Ps, I did 6-8 for maths SATs but these exams weren't SATs (I did those last year) The exams I've just had were just end of year things. Thanx for your review.
LordK
2004-07-14
ch 1,
Interesting... these are very interesting. The style is interesting. I don't quite understand why it's about school, but I do like the Strawberry Bonbons theme. I can't find a word for this besides interesting, as I didn't completely comprehend them... I liked "Fogs it's own reflection in", however. They seemed somewhat experimental, and abstract. Cool.
Eralk Fang
2004-07-13
ch 1,
Whoa. This really, really reminds of how to an teenager, something an adult would blink at can be totally devastating. Great job.
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