 Heaven Help Me 05 2007-11-09 . chapter 9it's awesome. i wonder wut andy means "keeping a promise"? o well, i'll find out soon lol. |
 Mettie 2005-01-25 . chapter 9Oh, it's so wonderful to finally have an update! I just love this story and I'm so glad she has a friend now. Or at least someone to talk to. Kimmi is exactly what she needed. Someone from a big city that has more than what's on the surface to her to help her open up to everyone else around her. She even likes baseball! It'll be perfect. I'm so glad you updated and it was nice to get re-acquainted with your wonderful and creative characters. Keep up the great work and please update soon! ~*Mettie*~ |
 thenewromantic 2005-01-25 . chapter 9Wow, I'm so glad you updated This is great, as usual - but question; why did you put all the previous chapters in this one?? ^_^ I like Kimmi and Peco! Good job as always, update soon |
 Jen 2005-01-21 . chapter 8 Please update soon, or I'm gonna cry! I've been waiting so long for you to update. One chapter at least? Please? |
 thenewromantic 2005-01-11 . chapter 8This is fantastic - I REALLY want to find out what the promise was! And PLEASE can Andy and Isabella break up and Andy and Kylie fall in love?? ^^ Please..? :) |
 thenewromantic 2005-01-11 . chapter 7Even more intriguing... I really want to know why Andrew's helping Kylie out, you've built up the suspense really well! |
 thenewromantic 2005-01-11 . chapter 6Very nice! I'm guessing the tree was important to Andrew in some way... as always, you are continuing to build up all the characters and their emotions, and this is so well-written. |
 thenewromantic 2005-01-11 . chapter 4I love the way you write the accents. |
 thenewromantic 2005-01-11 . chapter 3You can see the motives for each character really clearly here - this is so good! |
 thenewromantic 2005-01-11 . chapter 2Better and better! Already I can read hints of the plot to come into this, and you're building things up really well. |
 thenewromantic 2005-01-09 . chapter 1Very good so far - you've set the scene really well! |
 D.M. Jackson 2004-09-18 . chapter 8very starnge what's the promise and what the heck is wrong with belle shes like evil psycho chick from hell lol j.k but anway update soon please...Fate |
 sesshoumaru guess who? 2004-09-12 . chapter 8 theres just somethng about andy... |
 betty weouu 2004-09-12 . chapter 7 baseball game. loved it! |
 betty..poeveeltater..whatever 2004-09-12 . chapter 6 i like this chapter because it had alot of conversing |