I LOVE IT ! Wonderfully written. I just went through a break up myself and my friend told me "Well, it's better to have loved then to have never loved at all" And I disagreed and I'm so glad someone else agrees with me. Yes and wow it's just great. I love your format and how you broke up the "stages" and I love the ending. Very nice.

WOW! powerful, very powerful! i liked this alot, made me think and i like that about a poem. i like your style of writing! very very nice job, thank you!