 Lauren334 2004-07-15 . chapter 1Hey Kourt! Great job! and I love your new name =D This was really good. It flowed well in most of the lines, but some could have flowed better. I'm no expert in poetry. It was still awesome though! What a dumb jerk. I'd be glad he left me the slime ball =P hehe. Okay I'm done =P Well I'll ttyl and I can't wait for the next chappie of TPOS! Lov ya
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