wow, that was brilliant. What are you a junior in highschool?! lol. That's really advanced. If you aren't a junior you should be. Or even higher yet. I'm sorry to see not many people know of your writings. That will change soon. For I believe that a good writer deserves good feedback, and you are a good writer, my friend. Therefore, I will see to it that you get plenty of feedback.

Goodness! I've never read such a long poem, but your words got me hooked from the very beginning. I loved the ending. Very sweet sounding.