A happy poem! And such a beautifully subtle metaphor, expertly executed. This poem is a masterpiece. It has such vivid imagery, and produces instantly within me the warmth of the moment that bore these words. Hands down, your best work.

yay short and sweet. :O) that is such a great use of the image "fireworks"...nicely done.

Wow. I usually loathe haikus. But this was pretty good. I like the metaphor of you being a firework. Yay :D