Ghoulish. I like it.

You know how to write...love it...
Please R&R some of my other poems Thanks

wow...just wow!

hm...
i like how it's a deep poem, but it's about love.
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i think. great poem!

i loved the imagery!

wow... powerful and true

I have don't this to people so many times. It never stops Hurting. People have done this to me so many times. It never stops hurting. You have portrayed the act of lying very well. Well done.

it's like a bitchslap to your mind when you read it... you can't stop because of the words, but the things they tell, man oh man! you write about the event in a way no one else could think to capture.

Simple, but made me feel like I had to go take a shower asap, which of course, was you goal. :) Very good

thick with bitter irony...good but sad write.

yum! you are amazing! your talent is boundless, yAy!

absolutely lovely...i love the words "true falsehoods denied" together. this poem was very simple and straightforward, and i thought that worked well with the subject. awesome job!