Ah, fate, such a wonderful thing sometimes.Good work!!Katy

Hi! It's Katy, the one you talked to on Mary's contact list?I love this story of yours!! I just got my account on here. Once I get one of my original works first chapters done, I'll have it up.Keep up the great writing, and now I'm gunna read chapter two!! yay!!

Good story! Please keep writng!

Hi! I like this chapter a lot, but I have questions. She was blind in the first chapter, so how is it that she can see in the second? You said her hair was short, so why is it past her shoulders? How did her mother make her neck bleed, and since she ended up only a couple blocks from her home, where did she go on her two hour walk? I love you, so keep writing. Maybe my questions will be answered in coming chapters. Bye for now.

Aw! How sweet. I want an old man too! *smiles* Baby, I love your writing, and I love you. Keep writing. I wanna know what happens to her. Does she get her hair cut? I hope not, but that would be like them. Never stop creating. It's what you were meant for. Your writing has a musical quality unlike anything else I've read. No, I'm not saying that because you're my susband. If you wanted you could live forever held up along with all the great writers before you. I love you.

I really like this story. It was a wonderful start, keep up the good work.

A, that's a wonderful chapter. Good twin man. Write soon, Kay? I want to know what happens to Elizabeth. Oh, yeah. How's your Liz doing? lol.

Wow, Adrian. You write well! How did you manage to do it? It's beautiful. Go on, K/ I want chapter two.