Love it! Brilliant! I loved the lines " Isn't it peculiar how I must reap what you've sown?" and "this is the newest type of cancer." Please keep writing, and why don't you have titles to any of your stories?
~SwimmerGirl~

It's a shame no one has reviewed this, because it is a beautiful piece of writing. It is filled with human emotion and exuberates a kind of primitive feeling that seems indescribable. I'll also take this time to thank you for your very kind review on my poem, it is greatly appreciated.Thank you again, and good job on your writing!