The ending threw me...heh. I like it. Sometimes it is a bit confusing who is talking during the dreams, but that might be intended...well, very good..keep it up.

Hey, Shin! It's "Reia." *cough* Um... Sorry, I forgot to review before when you first showed this to me. So here goes.
*sob* You are SUCH a good writer. I love the concept! Although... I -was- getting a bit confused when he was conversing with the dream self. Maybe make the dream self say Shay's name? But it is a great story. ^_^ NEVER STOP WRITING!

Wow... that's a very unique short story idea there Shin. I'm not usually one for short stories but I actually liked this one, though I had no idea what it was about at first seeing how I didn't read your little summary of it. XD But good job on this, maybe you should do some other sorts of stories like these. ^.^
~Jedzi~sama~

I love it. Great job!
-Nicole-