+blink blink+ ...

-gushing tears- T_T

Pain hurts so much and your words give expression to the hurts that present themselves to us.

oh my gosh, this is really good. especially the twist in the end. wooh! love this one!

Love the message that was conveyed in the last stanza. This had a nice flow to it, and was overall beautiful and well written. Nice job, as a whole. There are some parts that could have used elaboration, etc. but I"m not picky like that. Good job.

Aww, that was so good. I'm adding that to my favorite stories, I loved it! That was sad and catchy and it almost brought tears to my eyes. I LOVED IT!

that was...nice. Very good. Thanks for R/R-ing a few of my fics on fanfiction.net! And...I hope to be updating er...i mean posting a new story in the future. As to whether or not that'll be the near future remains to be seen. Anyways...yeah.
~HC

wow, that was... wow... no words can describe this. its really good. i much enjoyed it. very well spoken and explained.

nice poetry...reminds me of linkin park lyrics part of it. i really like it!
paperbags and angry voices,
under a sky of dust
another wave of tension
has more than filled me up
I am talk about taking action
these words were never true...