I very much like this. (Perhaps in part b/c I love abstract poetry? hee but can't really write it myself.) I found the last two lines to be esepecially powerful. I guess the thing I most liked about this piece was that I gleaned an emotion and a sense without a message.
V. n. nice, again.
AnelizRei

I like this, especially the line ''in the heart of nothingness, there is no room for you.'' it just makes sense. :)

Ha! Strange and rather insatiable. I can't stop reading it. Cool.

For a such a random poem... this is really good! Doesn't really make much sense but you put things together perfectly. Good job!