Ah, this is excellent!! Oh my gosh, it was so worth the wait!I loved the way Scott used the switchblade in the ground to get a connection. Grr...I think that Sheriff is pure evil. *cough* kill him *cough* Poor Scott getting blamed! This whole thing seems kinda shady...I'm with Matt on that. Keep writing, I can't wait for more!
Hillary

Ooh, this is so awesome! I love the whole scene with Melissa and the sort of 'game' the man is playing with Scott. Hmm, if you ask me, the sheriff seems suspicious, lol. When he said 'Of course, we'll have to deal with it' to Matt...I got shivers, lol. Good chapter!

This is great! Especially how Allan Green ended up being dead...Does that mean that someone else visited Scott? You might want to be a little clearer on that, because at first I took it to mean that Allan had killed himself after talking to Scott...Hm, I dunno though. Lol, keep up the awesome chapters though. ^^
Hillary

AAHH! ur scaring me, waffles! and i dont no y, but i dont like Matt...i dont trust him lol. keep the chapters coming!

This is really great! I love the switchblade ^^ I really like the idea of Allan Green coming to Scott in the night and telling him what really happened. This is wicked awesome, keep writing!
Hillary

This is really cool so far. I like the way you're developing Scott's character and at the same time, sort of hinting at a past that you haven't clued the audience in on yet. Please keep writing, I can't wait to read more!
Hillary