wow. i siply adore your writing! and you're a guy? hard to beleive ... but cool

Haha I like this one surreal blending of everyday items into a deep flowing prose about the nature of relationships and time. This poem smacks of absurdism, it contains the base elements of any great poem. Originality, flexibility and dynamic prose that keeps the meaning moving.
Good job *respect*.

I like the progression it brings and then the abrupbt stop at the end with ''CHERRY''. Niceness.

Interesting poem. I liked it until the "CHERRY" at the end, then I just got confused. Is there a meaning to it? Because if you, the author, can't figure out what it means no one else will be able to either. Keep writing!