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tonight we bloom 2009-08-11 . chapter 1
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous.
I love the imagery in this.


I would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
Morncreek 2007-05-26 . chapter 1
I am sticking it to FP so I can say this: "Aurora Borealis" is as beautiful to me, if not more so, than when I first read it.

I hope that this year finds you in good health wherever you are. Love, Morncreek
Guardrail 2006-09-09 . chapter 1
This is seriously amazing. Your imagry is wonderful; I especially loved the lines, "a magician's cloak romancedby the northern sky;". Great work!
youzi 2005-05-23 . chapter 1
What lovely lines! I need to read more beautiful things like this. Keep writing =D
Moonjava 2005-05-21 . chapter 1
This is very nice I like it.
Cloud Burst 2005-03-17 . chapter 1
this sounds so romantic.. ur poem is lovely, i only wish it were longer!!
Hershey249 2005-02-25 . chapter 1
Oh, wow. I really love the personification in this...it's honestly exquisite, and I don't use that word lightly. "A magician's cloak romanced by the northern sky"...wow. The way they flow, it could almost remind one of lovers' movements...and the way the lights seems to reach upwards. Wow. A magician's cloak...it does. It really does have that quality of unearthly fabric. You must really be in tune with such a phenomenon to be able to describe it like that. Beautiful.
Lidless Eye 2004-12-13 . chapter 1
I hope to see the Northern Lights soon... I had a chance to see them not too long ago, but I had been long sleeping when they came out, I heard.

I loved the description. Makes me want to see them more. =) Great great job.

~Lidless Eye
poetic abortion 2004-11-20 . chapter 1
This is really good. Me likes this alot.

~ Noelle ~
Shayne Edwin 2004-09-12 . chapter 1
nice.
Morncreek 2004-08-19 . chapter 1
Col. The words create an awesome image in my mind. And to repeat: col. ^_^
Catherine Abellanosa 2004-08-12 . chapter 1
this is really wonderful!
i hope i could be like you!
you really write very wondrful poems even if they're just that short!
i really love your works!
Anjeni Windsinger 2004-08-08 . chapter 1
*bangs head on the desk*
Why. Didn't. I. See. This. Before. ?.
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, etc., beautiful. My jaw dropped after I read the last line, but it's closed now (thankfully), even though I keep re-reading it. I would say that it's impossible how you can capture so damn much in so few words, but... you did it. Amazing. It's perfect.
I shall add it to my Favourites and it shall remain there forever.
Needa S 2004-08-01 . chapter 1
Wow..Should I say more? Sure, Brillant piece, very beautiful!
Needa S.
CoolBeans18s 2004-07-19 . chapter 1
*is blown over by total awe-struck stunning beautifulnessity of this piece*
Wo! This is amazing! The picture you've woven with your words convays more than even a photo of the aurora could create! Especially that line: "a magician's cloak romanced" Perfection!
~ CoolBeans18s
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