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| Kirian Pensky Lanatogue 2008-05-11 ch 3,  | abuseAh so Himon was drugged huh? Hm...that was good. -Vampriss2 |
| Kirian Pensky Lanatogue 2008-05-11 ch 2, | abuseUm...I'm not sure what to call it.It was good but,kind of sad. -vampriss2 |
| Kirian Pensky Lanatogue 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseHm...I wonder how she ended up in that tree...nice chap I really enjoyed it. -Vampriss2 |
| The Banshee's Tears 2006-06-16 ch 9, | abuseinteresting story, but kinda hard to follow. this is a very intriguing piece. good work chica |
| The Banshee's Tears 2006-06-16 ch 1, | abusemuy awesome |
| Desdemona-Snape 2006-04-04 ch 9, | abuse*Bows repeatedly* I am so sorry! I have not ben able to do much of anything! I love these chapters! And I won't be updating for a while...Sorry!! |
| Desdemona-Snape 2005-02-01 ch 7, | abuseNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNonoNoNo! NO! You have got to update please! Oh, and thanks for your reviews... |
| Rose of Granuaile 2005-01-24 ch 2, | abuseoo...cool...just something I wanted to say, I think Dagger gave in too quickly in the dialogue between her and Flame. Also, I know that not using conjunctions is more formla, which is good for this type of situation, but if you're gonna do that you need to make the rest of the dialogue less casual, just a suggestion. ~Hip |
| Rose of Granuaile 2005-01-24 ch 1, | abusewow, very powerful, going on to read the next chapter, you would definately like my story, although I cannot write love plots, good job! ~Hip |
| Desdemona-Snape 2004-08-25 ch 4, | abuseHuh... |
| Werewolf's One (Like, Mack) 2004-08-14 ch 3, anon. | abuseLike, hi Megan! Cool story! YOu could add more deatils in, like, were they are and what the places look like, and there is alot of "he" "she" "he" "he" "she" stuff, it gets confusing who is who is what gender, if you take my meaning. ;) And I dont really understand the point of the mission, the dragon, and what they all are. o.0 But its cool, I love the concept, the teen-romance, its super cool, keep writing! |
| Desdemona-Snape 2004-07-31 ch 3, | abuseoh... cool... |
| amy 2004-07-23 ch 3, anon. | abusehey meg, i mean daggerblade10614 how did u pick that name anyway well it was good but just to make it easier on whoever is readin' maybe u could put there real name or there nick name in appentasess(or however u spell it) (these are apprenthasess)please do this oh and im coming back 2 texas on july 25 and did u know no u don't know i got my eyes checked yesterday (7/22) and im getting my glasses today(7/23) don't worry i don't have to wear them all the time just when i want to see the blackboard(chaulkboard) or when i want to see far distance because im near sighted now so i have to wear them only when i want 2 be far sighted oh and i got my hair cut it's to my soulders and it has copper red streaks in it it looks really cute really it does don't worry it's cute ill send u pics(pictures):-p wellbye meghan, your bff amy :) |
| elasandra 2004-07-20 ch 3, | abuseWell written. HOpe u update soon! |
| suki9870 2004-07-20 ch 3, | abuseSounds kinda like the dementors from the Harry Potter series... Slycerpythoths or something... ~ suki9870 ~ |