 Cinnamon Zo 2004-09-01 . chapter 1Cool! Empowering. Strong writing. *~Write On!~* |
 drunken-doll 2004-07-23 . chapter 1Wow...lol...very very powerful...Great meaning...keep writing |
 Fuu Hououji1 2004-07-22 . chapter 1Woah. That was.
So.
Cool.
I like how you turned it into a form of tesing, almost. Daring them to try and hurt you. Do you do that as often as I? |
 katiebuggie 2004-07-14 . chapter 1*High five* Beautiful work! |
 Shimagami 2004-07-14 . chapter 1Go for the jugular vein! |
 fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS 2004-07-14 . chapter 1nice job!
thanks for your review on Sleepless.
I'm sorta suffer from insomnia too...lol |
 Crimsonoaks 2004-07-13 . chapter 1ooh cool poem. i like the empowering feel it has kinda hidden. i like how it seems to scream "in your face dorkwad" haha if i am wrong just tell me, but that is how it seems. it is good . |
 Narina 2004-07-13 . chapter 1Good job! I like this! It flows very nicely and rhymes well! :) |