I enjoyed this. It's short, and the writing is simple and straight-forward for the most part, but it's well-written, and the story has a good personality wrapped within it. I thought the ending was really good. Overall though, I don't think you quite got that emotional punch you were going for.

Aw, you wrote this about me, didn't you? You're so sweet..
Really though, this story made me jealous. I wish I was as cool as that girl. And worshipped. Because it's no fun to be worshipped if you're not perfect like her.
Very realistic emotion in this. Done very well.

really really beautiful!i really liked it. it was really sad and very emotive. i liked how it ended at lot. at first i was iffy about it, but after a while i started to really like it. im thinking...a sad ending, but in a good way...make sense?
added to my fav list, definitly. please R&R if you can
lani