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| iheartcarebears 2008-02-17 ch 1,  | abuseI liked your poem alot. Could you read mine I think you'd like it and you seem like you enjoy love poems... :) |
| losing gracie girl 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abusenice emphasis on what hurt u and how. i like it... yours until the wind changes, Lost |
| Black and White Dreams 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abuseOuch. I know how you feel. Love sucks most of the time. It's so horrible because having love in your life heals every wound, but when he leaves, the wounds open again and it's so hard to heal them a second time. The heart is a fragile thing. Excellent job with this. *~Black and White Dreams~* |
| Ariannabell-the one that di... 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseIt hurts so much, doesn't it. why can't life be perfect and such a sappy soap opera. It's like a bad reanactment of a Midsummer's Night Dream. Life just hurt's. Thanks for pulling me in even if it did reopen old wounds. Ariannabell~the one that died |
| CandidDelusions 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseWell thank you, I've tried to write this poem like a million times and never could get it right. You took the words right from my mouth. Amazing, thank you :) |
| sunshineofyourlife 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseyou have just become my best friend. oh i love it. the problem is that i've been there. so all of these make me cry remembering...thinking. i love them! i'm addicted. --Sunshine |
| Needa S 2006-04-27 ch 1, | abuseHeartfelt! Awesome write and thanks again for all your nice reviews. God Bless ya. |
| silver-cherubim 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abuseWell put... I know how this feels because its very similar to something I went through the past week... and I think you wrote it very well. |
| endlessremorse 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseWell...what everyone else below me said?? lol good poem! |
| JWren 2005-09-07 ch 1, | abusevery relate-able. |
| Words On Paper 2005-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. Good. I can TOTALLY relate. *NonNonNon* Well...You read some of my other poems, so...if you don't mind, I'd like you to read my "Painful Beauty" one and tell me what ya think...no one's read it yet, so...-_-' |
| Endowment's Seraph 2004-08-19 ch 1, | abusehey, yeah, I know you asked me to read this a long time ago but I forgot. well I'm glad I went through my reviews and came back to this. I can feel the pain from your words, it's very well written ~Mel |
| the missing piece 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abuseoh man, ha, this is literally, i cannot even tell you, how much it is EXACT with my life right now. thanks for this poem, really. |
| lilGyMnAsTcHiC 2004-08-02 ch 1, | abuseOuch, that's gotta hurt! Falling for your best friend, huh. Sorry that had to happen like that. I kind of know how you feel. Keep writing poems, I really like your work! |
| lightning sphinx 2004-07-29 ch 1, | abuseDang...that does hurt... just reading it. Nice, but sad. ~lIgHTning_SpHinX~ |