although i do not actually agree, it was written very well, some of it was very beautiful

this is really unique b/c i've never heard of anyway compare the Lord's touch to a razor. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

I've had a very similiar experience this past month. (Actually, just these past two weeks).

wow, comparing God's touch to a razor, that's an interesting thought. At first I thought it would be really weird, but the way you put it, it makes a lot of sense, especially in the verse where you say "Your touch cuts through my loneliness Calms the ache I’m feeling
Your touch removes the nightmare
Yet it never mars"
That's very true! God cuts away our pain, and heals us. Wonderful job!

Wow that was not weird but unique! I've never heard anyone compare God's touch to a razor.