|Reviews for Hel's Desires|
| Lorendiac 7/16/04 . chapter 1
Well, that was nicely bleak. Which, I suppose, is appropriate for the subject matter. :)
I've read about the old myths and I'm partly of mixed Scandinavian descent myself, but I confess I never felt tempted to write anything quite like that. I'm a "happy ending" kind of guy.
Now for the obligatory nitpick to show I was paying attention: At one point you said, "of ancient dieties who rule"
when it should have been, "of ancient deities who rule".
| Serendipitous Passage 7/14/04 . chapter 1
this is interesting. i know a little about Norse mythology, so i can appreciate the refrences you made. this has great imagry, but its a little monotonous for some reason. some of the lines sound the same. you might want to work on that. keep writing. you have great style that makes your writing unique.